UPDATES on storieeee

This past couple of weeks, I've been working on ironing out some story glitches and trying to shorten my long ass animatic which apparently was running at about 5 minutes.  I managed to cut it down to 4 minutes ish! Below is my updated animatic.  Some things/ shots are still going to change, but for now, I'll post it as is.

Some things that have changed:

I believe I'm going to start of the film with him holding the music box with the center piece in tact.  There is not revealing of the centerpiece in the end.. too complicated

The guitarist in the end will not be his father- again to complicated.  It is going to be a random person he meets and shares a moment with. Short and sweet.